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Friday, May 27, 2016

The Eagle and the Salmon

WALT- Write a description
We used a writing template to produce our descriptions 


I heard a scary noise.
I heard a bird take the salmon.
I saw the bird was flying up the tree.
I saw the bird take the salmon and eat the salmon.
I felt the bird was not happy the salmon because it take the salmon and eat.
I wondered if the water was gold and blue?
By Mereka 



I heard the fish splash in the water.
I heard the eagle scream.
I saw the eagle eat the fish.
I wondered if the eagle ate the fish.
I felt scared for the fish.
By Aleena 

10 comments:

  1. HI Mereke, I like how you used the word "because" to extend your sentence. Aleena, have you ever heard a real Fish Eagle? They make the most beautiful sound, I love to listen to them. Good writing room 9!

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  2. Very Nice piece of writing keep it the good work up by Johann

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  3. hey Rebecca your work totally rocks cause I have never seen a student with a great work like this.
    I wonder if you could teach me to write like you
    Rebecca.

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  4. Hi there Mareka and Alena. I like your descriptions, they are amazing. Well done.

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  5. Very good storys room 6

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  6. Very good storys room 6

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  7. I like this a lot.

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  8. I like this a lot.

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  9. Hi Room 9 that is a good pace of work

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  10. hi room 9 very good work i fell a little sory for the fish :)

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