The outdoor's looked nice and bright.
I saw tall bright green tree's hanging over me.
I could taste some delicious ice cream.
I could smell some nice fresh air.
I could hear some car's driving past me.
I felt so happy and charming.
Kia ora Room 9, Thanks for sharing your writing about the outdoors. It was effective to use the five senses to drescibe the outdoors and how you felt as well. I almost felt like I was outdoors.
Kia ora Room 9, Thanks for sharing your writing about the outdoors. It was effective to use the five senses to drescibe the outdoors and how you felt as well. I almost felt like I was outdoors.
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