WALT- Write a description
We used a writing template to produce
our descriptions
I heard a scary noise.
I heard a bird take the salmon.
I saw the bird was flying up the tree.
I saw the bird take the salmon and eat the salmon.
I felt the bird was not happy the salmon because it take the
salmon and eat.
I wondered if the water was gold and blue?
By Mereka
I heard
the fish splash in the water.
I heard
the eagle scream.
I saw the
eagle eat the fish.
I
wondered if the eagle ate the fish.
I felt
scared for the fish.
By Aleena
HI Mereke, I like how you used the word "because" to extend your sentence. Aleena, have you ever heard a real Fish Eagle? They make the most beautiful sound, I love to listen to them. Good writing room 9!
ReplyDeleteVery Nice piece of writing keep it the good work up by Johann
ReplyDeletehey Rebecca your work totally rocks cause I have never seen a student with a great work like this.
ReplyDeleteI wonder if you could teach me to write like you
Rebecca.
Hi there Mareka and Alena. I like your descriptions, they are amazing. Well done.
ReplyDeleteVery good storys room 6
ReplyDeleteVery good storys room 6
ReplyDeleteI like this a lot.
ReplyDeleteI like this a lot.
ReplyDeleteHi Room 9 that is a good pace of work
ReplyDeletehi room 9 very good work i fell a little sory for the fish :)
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